Desk crit no. 3: Jina Tollett

I thought your project looks really good. I like
the use of kid friendly primary colors and the
blocky shapes. Maybe it’s because my eyes are
tired today, but it seems like the yellow text on
the red was a little hard to read. I was a little
bit confused about which part of the navigation
was yours (even having read your message), but I
don’t think that is avoidable as this site is
obviously meant to integrate in with the current
content (which I think it does admirably well.)

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