Desk crit 5: Lauren

Hi Robin,
I enjoyed looking at your project, especially your photographs and galleries. I like the fact that you brand your photos, and how you’ve explored options for changing the style
sheet on the fly. I wanted to start learning CSS this semester and found that it over-taxed my brain — it is just a very different way of thinking! So, I cannot begin to know how you managed to do it! I like how your flash piece integrates
with the the look and feel of the site, and would maybe like
to have one fewer color block element in the blue theme —
maybe the violet on the left side which is very close in value
to the blue that is used for the link blocks. I like the colors and the background image in the blue theme, but the green theme colors seemed to be placed or used in a way that better conveys structure and hierarchy. If that makes any sense.

I also agree with some of the other comments you have received that it would be nice to have the opening flash piece freeze on the title a little longer before going into the gallery.

Thanks for sharing your site — I would really appreciate any suggestions you could offer on my 6190 project.
Thanks!
Lauren

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